Thursday, October 28, 2010

The Old Lion’s Roar

The Old lion’s Roar

Was it the same as the

Lion’s old Roar?

Nay, Not so

A roar?

A whimper may be

Crushed by the very life

It fought to live…..

A scary thought

The fate wrought


The Old lion’s roar

Was it the same as the

Lion’s old Roar?

Nay, Not so

A roar?

A thunder may be

Strengthened by the very life

Which tried to kill

A mighty thought

The dream sought

6 comments:

  1. : ) Nice demonstration of opposites.. How vibrant thoughts could change Life ..! Well written again.. !!

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  2. I must admit that i have become a fan :-)

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  3. Wonderful! What a symmetry of thoughts, and of words!! Hats off...

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  4. A 'Roaring' Success, not just this lovely poem, but your entire blog. Keep going gal! :)

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  5. Thanks Pundalik, Suneel and MM for the words of appreciation!

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