Monday, February 20, 2012

Punya Koti



The thought of calf
Brought Punya Koti back in time
In the darkness of the jungle
Dangers abound
Punya Koti began its lonesome journey
Homeward bound
The calf’s cry, the flying time
Getting home was the thing on mind

A lonesome cow
A tiger on prowl
The cow the tiger did sight
The cow the tiger did fight
The calf’s hunger, the ferocious teeth
The ferocious growl, the hunger cry
The lonely cow did try
With my calf I need to be
Oh, cries of hunger call me home
Oh, please let me go
To the hunger pangs I must heed
I promise I shall come back
For now I must be homeward bound

To its calf the cow did go
The calf pleaded “must you go?”
I must, a promise needs to be kept
Oh, I pray to you please let me go
I must, for a hunger awaits me
To the hunger pangs I must heed
Leaving its calf to the cows
Punya Koti began its journey
This time it was towards the jungle forlorn

In the forest the tiger lay
Cursing itself
For it was long that the cow had gone
Would it walk back to its death?
In the forest the tiger lay
Cursing itself for being tricked
A cow it did see
Walking back
Slow and steady in its track
The cow definitely needed a head check
For it indeed had walked back to its death
Oh do I kill the cow so?
Is it unto me to kill you so?

Beyond the last turn
That the cow took
A great death it did behold
For in the track lay the tiger cold
Oh, this sin I cannot take upon my soul
Punya Koti may your name be told!

[Punya- virtuous deed; Koti-  A Crore
(One deed equivalent to a crore virtuous deeds)

This is a Kannada folklore, I heard as a kid. It is usually recited as a poem interspersed with elaborations by the reciter. This has been written from memory and obviously enough, it has turned out  inferior to the original one :)]

6 comments:

  1. Anything refreshing good old childhood memories can never be considered inferior!

    Thanks Shreya for bringing back those lovely memories and re-telling a tale that needs to be told and understood by us all.

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  2. I especially liked the way you used the line "To the hunger pangs I must heed", in two different contexts, describing two entirely different emotions. Bang on target, Shreyu! It brought out the essence of the poem beautifully :)


    "The calf’s hunger, the ferocious teeth
    The ferocious growl, the hunger cry"
    ... liked the antithesis, the dilemma in Punya Koti's mind was aptly conveyed.

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  3. I liked it very much :-) It is one of my favorite stories and very poetically re-told by you :-)

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  4. Nice post to kick start 2012.. very well written.

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  5. Wonderfully written, took me Down the memory lane...emotions are well captured in the lines...
    This was the first story narrated by my Grandfather when I was a kid!

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  6. Thanks a lot for the words of appreciation!:)

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